I feel gravity that I have not felt for two years; it seems far less
heavy than the earth, which I have left couple of years ago, but still there it
is. My rocket was parked under huge tree-like rock, set lazily under thousands
of stars glimmering in the navy blue sky, but I couldn't be sure whether it was
really a rock or not. Everything was as different as similar to the earth. As I
took off my space suit, I breathed the smell of this little planet. With faint
smell of orange, the planet was strangely lively though there seems to be no
movement of living things.
Few meters apart from the pool, there was another pool. A pink, ping-pong ball-sized soft grains with that the second pool was filled savored melted sugar. After some grains were packed safely in my bag, I found a school of hopping fish swimming among the beads; I didn’t know what else to call the fishlike creatures. They had polished pink scales and two pair of sharp teeth. I picked a fish at the rear of the fish school and dangled it at the tail of my bag. The fish sounded like a xylophone ring.
As I stepped forward couple of miles, trees appeared more frequently. Most of them had white stems, yellowish leaves and rough bark but there were few all-white and smooth ones. Somehow, trees which had been seen occasionally became a forest. Above my head, they stretched their arms so thickly that piece of the sky couldn’t be seen. When I tried to peel the bark of white tree, a low voice rang like widow’s moan. Heart-shaped leaves fell on my shoulder while a thick branch of the tree moved slowly. Horrified, I ran until I escaped the forest and got to the starting point of the exploration.
My rocket waited for me under the huge rock. It was time to go back but I couldn’t board the rocket. Since few minutes ago, strangely disgusting feeling was reaching my throat. I was so dizzy and suddenly I was vomiting up stinky pink liquid, smelling sweet ironically. A finger-size lizard with six legs crawled out from the filth. It looked back me as if he, or she, bade farewell, and then went away. Still disgusting, I poured out all the things that I had collected and got on the rocket, which I regarded as the only safe place on this terrible planet. I swear, I’ll never leave the earth if I once get home.
부끄러움을 무릅쓰고 올리는 작문과제입니다. 영어 잘하는 친구들도 있고 하니 문법상의 오류나 어색한 부분은 망설이지 말고 지적해 주세요. 주제는 우리 교수님이 정하신거니까 저더러 유치하다고 하지 말고요(..) 영어 잘하는 친구들도 있고 하니 기대하겠음. 과제 제출기한이 끝나면 이 포스팅은 비공개로 전환될 수도 있습니다.
Few meters apart from the pool, there was another pool. A pink, ping-pong ball-sized soft grains with that the second pool was filled savored melted sugar. After some grains were packed safely in my bag, I found a school of hopping fish swimming among the beads; I didn’t know what else to call the fishlike creatures. They had polished pink scales and two pair of sharp teeth. I picked a fish at the rear of the fish school and dangled it at the tail of my bag. The fish sounded like a xylophone ring.
As I stepped forward couple of miles, trees appeared more frequently. Most of them had white stems, yellowish leaves and rough bark but there were few all-white and smooth ones. Somehow, trees which had been seen occasionally became a forest. Above my head, they stretched their arms so thickly that piece of the sky couldn’t be seen. When I tried to peel the bark of white tree, a low voice rang like widow’s moan. Heart-shaped leaves fell on my shoulder while a thick branch of the tree moved slowly. Horrified, I ran until I escaped the forest and got to the starting point of the exploration.
My rocket waited for me under the huge rock. It was time to go back but I couldn’t board the rocket. Since few minutes ago, strangely disgusting feeling was reaching my throat. I was so dizzy and suddenly I was vomiting up stinky pink liquid, smelling sweet ironically. A finger-size lizard with six legs crawled out from the filth. It looked back me as if he, or she, bade farewell, and then went away. Still disgusting, I poured out all the things that I had collected and got on the rocket, which I regarded as the only safe place on this terrible planet. I swear, I’ll never leave the earth if I once get home.
부끄러움을 무릅쓰고 올리는 작문과제입니다. 영어 잘하는 친구들도 있고 하니 문법상의 오류나 어색한 부분은 망설이지 말고 지적해 주세요. 주제는 우리 교수님이 정하신거니까 저더러 유치하다고 하지 말고요(..) 영어 잘하는 친구들도 있고 하니 기대하겠음. 과제 제출기한이 끝나면 이 포스팅은 비공개로 전환될 수도 있습니다.
잡담, 일상*
2007/04/05 08:26, mari.
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더 많이 잃기전에...™ 2007/04/08 14:13 Delete Reply
움..역시나 전공자들은 못 따라가는듯 ㅎㅎ
영작과제는 언제나 순위권인데...모르겠는 단어가 많군요;; -
파반 2007/04/10 01:34 Delete Reply
솔직히 전 잘모르겠고
원하신다면... 룸메이트한테 한번 물어봐 드릴까요?
제가 해드리고 싶지만... 실력이 ㅠ ㅠ -
치올 2007/04/16 17:14 Delete Reply
스크롤을 그냥 내려버릴수 밖에 없네영;;;
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Gilgalad 2007/06/30 04:12 Delete Reply
한국사람에게 관사와 전치사 사용은 참 힘든 것 같아요.
온 김에 둘러보다가 또 충동댓글 달았군요...^^;